Friday, 6 September 2013

Perfect Sense


This is a very dull piece of writing.

Mary went to the shop to buy some eggs. She liked eggs. So she made a trip down to Tesco’s Express to pick some up. She only had a few bob on her, but she discovered a deal on Flora butter. Oh how she loved Flora. In sheer delight, she discovered she had enough for not just the eggs. But the flora too! It was a good day for Mary.

This is a very dull piece of writing.

Mary went to the shop to buy some eggs. She liked eggs. So she made a trip down to Tesco’s Express to pick some up. She only had a few bob on her, but she discovered a deal on Flora butter. Oh how she loved Flora. In sheer delight, she discovered she had enough for not just the eggs. But the flora too! It was a good day for Mary.

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